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- AS and A-level English Literature A 7711; 7712
Teaching guide: Love through the ages
A range of resources to help you plan your teaching and assessment for the Love through the ages component of AS and A-level English Literature A.
How to use these resources
If you haven't yet decided on which texts or text combinations to teach, the specimen assessment materials give you details about some of the aspects of Love through the ages each text covers, which can help you decide. Don't forget to consult the specification for a list of possible aspects.
Once you have decided, these documents will help you to focus your teaching on those aspects and to work towards the relevant exam question in the specimen assessment materials. The exemplar student responses with marking commentary act as models for the students and help you to assess their work.
AS resources
Paper 1, section a.
- Exemplar student response - lower band 4 - Othello
- Exemplar student response - middle band 4 - Othello
Paper 1, Section B
- Creating your own questions
- Exemplar student response - band 3
- Exemplar student response - lower band 4
- Exemplar student response - upper band 4
- Exemplar student response - band 5
- Specimen question commentary
Paper 2, Section A
The collection of unseen prose extracts can be used to support the learning objective of week 7 in our autumn term teaching plan (Co-teaching programme of study) - approaching unseen extracts essay writing skills.
Using the extracts allows students to:
- be able to apply the knowledge gained doing the prose study to the analysis of unseen prose extracts
- understand the demands of AS Paper 2, Section A
- learn how to structure a response to a practice exam question.
- Extract 1 - The Great Gatsby , F. Scott Fitzgerald
- Extract 2 - Far from the Madding Crowd , Thomas Hardy
- Extract 3 - Persuasion , Jane Austen
- Extract 4 - The Awakening , Kate Chopin
- Extract 5 - Atonement , Ian McEwan
- Extract 6 - The Rotters' Club , Jonathan Coe
- Exemplar student response - band 4 - The Age of Innocence
- Extract 5 - Atonement , Ian McEwan
Paper 2, Section B
- Exemplar student response - band 3 - Jane Eyre and Rebecca
- Exemplar student response - band 3 - The Great Gatsby and The Rotters' Club
- Exemplar student response - band 4 - The Great Gatsby and The Rotters' Club
- Specimen question commentary - comparing prose texts
A-level resources
- Specimen question commentary - The Winter's Tale
- Example answer - band 2 - The Winter's Tale
- Example answer - band 5 - The Winter's Tale
- Download the full package for Paper 1, Section A
- Exemplar student response - band 3 response
- Exemplar student response - band 5 response
- Specimen question commentary - unseen poetry

Paper 1, Section C
- Exemplar student response - band 2 - The Awakening and AQA Anthology of Love Poetry through the Ages: post-1900
- Exemplar student response - band 5 - The Awakening and AQA Anthology of Love Poetry through the Ages: post-1900
- Specimen question commentary - comparing texts
Document URL https://www.aqa.org.uk/resources/english/as-and-a-level/english-literature-a/teach/love-through-the-ages-resource-package
Last updated 06 Sep 2021
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Unseen Poetry A Level-A* EXEMPLAR ESSAYS
Subject: English
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I am currently on a gap year with a place to study Biochemistry at Oxford. I studied OCR Biology, OCR Chemistry, AQA English Literature and Edexcel History. I achieved A*A*A*A* in my A Levels so I'm sharing my revision notes to help others achieve top marks. Feel free to email me with any questions - [email protected] :) I am also available for ONLINE A-LEVEL and GCSE TUTORING (I achieved A*A*88999999999 in GCSEs as well). Pop me an email for more information! Best of luck :)
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I achieved an A* in AQA English Literature A Level - here is a document with 3 unseen poetry comparison A* (band 5) essays. The marks each essay achieved are - 24/25, 25/25, 25/25. These include a copy of the supporting poems. These essays were marked by an AQA Examiner. The best way to learn how to reach the top marks is to analyse exemplar essays like these - to see how to enhance your own essay style to easily achieve consistent A*s :)
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A Level English Lit - COMPLETE 12 A* EXEMPLAR ESSAYS
I achieved an A* in AQA English Literature A Level - here are all my exemplar essays for different texts. There are 12 exemplar essays in total - 8 achieved 25/25, 3 achieved 24/25 and 1 achieved 23/25. These are all in Band 5 and high A* standard. An AQA Examiner marked these. Studying exemplar essays was the best and easiest way that got me to A* standard myself. Invaluable resource :)
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I’m tutoring a student for A Level English Literature, which is brilliant, as I love teaching A Level and my student is hugely enthusiastic and really listens and adapts her ideas/thinking/approaches (which is also brilliant).
We started by talking about the Assessment Objectives that underpin the essay criteria – A01 and A02 and discussed the way that the question will be framed and how this is very ambiguous:
In your response you are required to analyse how meanings are shaped.
(choice of two poems)
Analyse in detail the following poem. (30 marks)
We decided the key here is the meaning and how that can be drawn out.
We looked at past examiner feedback that stated the key to understanding was reading the poem and re-reading. With this in mind we talked about timing:
Exam total – 2 hours
Unseen Prose – (50 marks) 1 hour 15 minutes
Unseen Poetry – (30 marks) 45 minutes
For the Poetry this then divides into – 10 minutes reading and planning a response (focusing on what the poem means) – 30 minutes writing – 5 minutes editing.
After discussing this we went through the planning process. We decided that due to the vagueness of the question, framing a question around the summary of meaning was a good approach, so that the essay was focused and could adopt a sophisticated approach.
We also discussed the essay structure and how the meaning would drive the overall number of paragraphs and how the meaning should be drawn out. For A Level, unlike GCSE we would be thinking about the paragraphs as an organic part of the writing, rather than trying to teach an overall structure. In this way, there is more freedom for the interpretation, at least that is the intent!

As you can see at the bottom of the poem, we discussed how to start planning to time. This was because we both annotated the same poem, using the planning notes from earlier.

At the end of the session, we both wrote an introduction thinking about the rules we’d explored previously and how this could support what we wanted to say in the essay.

Both myself and the student had never studied the poem before. I used the wonderful @becky1820 (s) resources for this session, as she shared them with me, for the purpose of tutoring, and I only hope I’ve done them justice. The student will go on to write the essay independently and we’ll look at it together in another session.
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I hope that this is useful. I enjoyed the rich discussion around the process, the poem and just generally the love of the subject.
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Hi Susan, This is wonderful. I am tutoring A level literature too! So useful. Thank you! Sue x
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Thanks a lot……… This really changed my motive toward answering questions in exam. Also planning to write A level exam this year and the fear is so much but u fixed Dat today.
Thanks Praise, glad you are feeling better about the exam.
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Hello I am a year 13 student and i am interested in getting tutored. Is there any way i can contact you for further details. Thank You,my email is: [email protected]
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